A short story about a girl with an eating disorder being forced to work with a boy she'd rather avoid, and before they know it, they collide for better or for worse.
My Figment Comment:
This story was very emotionally stirring. It was a little fast-paced but I didn't mind it, because the rest of it was just perfect. You created some good characters. ...This is a powerful short story with very strong elements. It's a quick ride through the emotions of a character struggling with an eating disorder. What I liked most about it, though, was that it ends hopefully. Nothing that happens is random in this story; you find towards the end that you've bonded with the main character and just want to give her a hug. The story is well-written and engaging, pulling you into the situation so you really feel like you're there cheering her on. Distinctive prose makes it enjoyable and realistic.
Great job! Worth the read. I love happy endings. I really hope this girl gets better :)
There is some strong language, but I felt it fit in with the character's situation, making her more realistic. This was worth the read.